NOTE: all of these time periods and whatnot are verrrry approximate, most of all the backgrounds and rough animation. but.... yes. it will get finished. :)
also, here is my reworked script-thinger.
Sound Effect | Action |
1. Jumping rope sfx | Long Shot pan across a garden in early spring (mostly gray, but a bit of green beginning to show in the grass and leaves) at the end of the pan, a little girl is jumping rope along the path and onscreen. |
2. jumping stops, panting robin twitter | Med. Close of the girl, she stops jumping, leans on her knees and pants a bit Mary hears the robin and looks around for him |
3. More twittering, footsteps | Longer Shot of Mary from up in a tree, the robin hops onto a branch on screen so we see him from the back, Mary sees and steps towards the tree as the robin hops onto the garden wall |
4. footsteps | Med./long Mary from the back, the robin is hopping on the wall |
5. twittering | Close on the robin, he hops about as he twitters (like he’s talking to Mary) |
6. Continue twittering, laughter | Close Mary laughs as she watches the robin |
7. twittering | Med. Close Robin hops some more, flies off the wall |
8. Twittering/laughing, footsteps | Long Mary steps back as the robin takes off, then gives chase; he flies around the corner of the wall and she follows |
9. Twittering and footsteps, low piping music | View into the garden path from a doorway onto the moor. we see the robin fly past and soon Mary follows; she passes the doorway completely, but then turns back and peeks around the doorway |
10. Piping music | Long View out onto the moor- short pan across to a tree where a boy is sitting with his back to us, playing the flute. A few animals are around listening |
11. Piping music | Close of a squirrel climbing down a tree over the boy’s head; the ground where a few other animals are is in view |
12. Footstep | Med. Mary steps softly through the doorway but her step makes a sound and she gasps a little |
13. Music stops | The animals look up, and the boy raises a hand, “shh,” but kindly. He puts his hand down and begins to stand up, very slowly |
14. | Side med. View of Mary, she blinks a couple times, a bit confused or surprised |
15. Rustle of animals | Back on Dickon, he is very slowly standing, then finally stands straight; the animals start to go, but not in a scared way |
16. Rustle of animals | Med./close of animals leaving , rabbit hopping away |
17. Short laugh | Close Backview of Dickon, he turns towards Mary and smiles/laughs |
18. | Close on Mary, she still looks surprised, then slowly smiles back. |